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segunda-feira, 26 de dezembro de 2011

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Luna: Princess of Equestria



"Luna. I now know what really happened. Me and Derpy" Says a bright brown male earth pony, that was with Derpy.
"WHOOVES I WANT A MUFFIN!" Says the Gray Mare, with the face pretty proxim the Doctor, with her wall-eyed eyes staring at him
“…” Doctor Whooves is staring at Derpy, and now is returning to look to Luna “We are going to help you, Princess!”
“Y-You guys are going to help?” Says Luna, impressed

               Chapter 1: The real history

Everypony know this history. The history about the Elements of Harmony. We all know about it. But...What if this history...Just isn't true? What really happened? I wanted to go there, were happened all this thing.
      
"So, now, it's time to enter in the Time Machine! “Said Whooves, entering in the Time Machine

"Oh dang, I put the wrong year… Damm it, wrong timeli-- Ooh, I’m on the timeline of when I was a little filly...So weird, I don't see Derpy..."
There were one filly gray mare with blonde mane, it remembered Derpy, but it had the eyes straight
"Muffins..."The filly ran into the Time Machine, without the Doctor see her
"Okay, time to go now!" He entered in the Time Machine, going to another timeline, and with a little unknown visitor

It was a pretty old looking place, and it was pretty dark, it was night.
"Wow...this look so different from the timeline I do live! “Said Whooves, fascinated and looking around
"Do you have Muffins? Because you smell like Muffin! And I like Muffins! MUFFINS WEEEE!" The filly started to ask for muffins to the Doctor
"D-Derpy? You didn’t had wall-eyed eyes?"
"Uh ,no. How do you know my name? That doesn’t matter, you have a Muffin! Give me the Muffin!"
"B-But...How did you get there?"
"If me answer, you give me a Muffin? "Derpy said, with a happy grin
"...FINE..." Said Whooves, with an expression of DANG, rolling his eyes up and then down
"First the Muffin!"
"No, first you answer me."
"First of all, show me the Muffin!"
"...FINE" Said the Doctor, with the same expression
Whooves didn’t had bring one Muffin, but he was smelling Muffins from the much he stay with Derpy. How he didn’t had a Muffin, he started to think about something. Suddenly, he got a good idea, while staring to a rock. He picked the pen that had bring, and drew Muffin in it.
“Well Derpy, see? This is a Muffin.” Said Doctor Whooves, pointing to the rock “Now answer. How did you got there?”
“I just entered in your time machine without you see! Now I’m going to eat that delicious Muffin!” She answered and ran to the rock, starting to eat it
Eh…I should had checked if there wasn’t anypony on the time machine… And I had forgot, Derpy have a pretty good dang nose to smell everything, principally Muffin, and I forgot too that I do smell Muffins…Now Derpy is already here… But I still don’t understand, her eyes are straight! How did them got wall-eyed? That’s so confu—
A purple Allicorn was there, lowing the Moon, waiting her sister to come and bring the Sun. And a white Allicorn appeared there too, starting to bring the Sun.
“T-These should be… Celestia and Luna!” Said the Doctor, starting to pick a pen and one paper, and so started to write about all. It was the day that all happened.
But this is weird. It’s said that Luna just refused to lower the Moon, but she lowed it normally! The history from the book is fa—
“BURRRP” Derpy burped, after eating the entire rock “That was a pretty delicious Muffin! But I still fell this is smell of Muffin! Why?”
“Err… It is just the smell of the Muffin you eat…”
“Oh! Now I understand!” The filly said “Is that paper?” The filly ran onto Whooves and stole some 5 papers and one pencil
“… Stay quiet, kid” The Doctor stared at Derpy and then returned to observe Luna and Celestia, with his paper and pen in the hoof, already writing that Luna don’t refuse.
“ So, eh, Luna, what about giving to me the control of the Moon? So you wouldn’t had to do all this work every day! What you think, sister?” Celestia said
“W-What? But I do enjoy doing this! It’s okay to me to do this every day! No need to worry, Tia!” Said Luna, with a good mood
“Luna. Give me the control of the Moon, now!”
“Cele? Why are you wanting to do this? It would be so much trouble to you! Of course not, I’m not going to give the Moon to you! It is so much work!” Said Luna, getting confused
“Luna, it doesn’t matter. GIVE IT!”
“N-No!”
“Then, I’m going to take it myself.” Said Celestia “I’m going to punish you and curse you…You will be punished to the Moon. For 1000 years, and you will be conscientious while all the time. And when you return, you will turn into an evil pony, Nightmare Moon! Celestia said, and started to do the spell of the curse.
“Celestia! Sister! Please, don’t do this! I love you as a sister, I would never do anything bad to you, and if you want, I can give the Moon! Just…Don’t do this with me!” Luna said, desperate and imploring, crying.
Celestia used the spell of the curse into Luna, and Luna fallen in the ground, getting a bit hurt from the spell, and one of her ears started to get totally black, just starting to transform her into Nightmare Moon. Celestia started to prepare the
“C-C-Celestia p-please d-don’t d-do t-t-this...” Luna said, with all the forces that remained in her, without forces to say or get up
Celestia just used the spell and punished Luna to the Moon, and got the control of both Sun and Moon
“Now, I’m the supreme ruler of Equestria. No other Princess to rule… And now I have a fake history that says I saved Equestria…” Said Celestia, satisfied with what done
“Oh my Celestia…So this was what happened…Luna wasn’t the evil one, and yes Celestia!” Said Doctor, feeling sorry for Luna and scared of Celestia, and with all wrote in the paper
“I drew everything that happened!” Said Derpy, showing the drawings to Whooves
Whooves just looked to all the drawings, that shows the real history.
While Doctor Whooves was looking the drawings, Derpy ran off.
“Hey Celestia! Hey there! I just watched everything you done! Wow you are really powerful!” Said Derpy, doing something that shouldn’t do
“YOU WHAT?!”Celestia exclaimed and prepared another spell.
“I said I seen you cursing Luna and punishing!” The filly said, happy and don’t knowing what was going to happen
Celestia shoot the spell in the gray filly, and from the effect of the spell, that was too much for a filly handle, Derpy just faint.
“Now… No one’s would ever believe in you!” Celestia said and then flew away
“DERPY! Oh no…” Doctor Whooves ran onto her, picked her and put her in his back “I need to put these papers in a secure local…” Said the Doctor, starting to dig and putting the papers there, and making a map for find them.
“Now I need to know if Derpy is okay…”Said the Doctor, with fear with what would happen. “Before teleport, I need to see if Derpy is okay, and I need a secure place…” Whooves ran to a secure place with the filly Derpy in the back.
Sometime later, Derpy woke up
“Ugh…I’m seeing everything so weird…A-And where I am?” Said the filly
“Yes! You are normal and okay! Nothing happe-- ” Whooves has now see that Derpy eyes were wall-eyed. “Oh no…So that is what Celestia done, and that is how Derpy eyes got like that…”
“What happened?” Said the filly, without understand
“Uh… Nothing, nothing…Come with me….”Whooves has pick the map with the mouth and ran to the Time Machine along with Derpy, and then entered on it, doing another time travel

“Derpy, that Is you right timeline. Good bye now, see you in my timeline, and sorry for about one thing…”Said the Doctor, entering in the Time Machine again.
“Bye!” Said Derpy
And the Doctor traveled in the time again, to the actual timeline


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